I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful song creation Susie. This is a great example of striving for personal best and you can be very proud of what you have created! I hope you keep writing and singing songs.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr Roberts,I'm very glad you enjoyed the song,you were the second person that go to watch to our lyric video.What do you think we can improve next time if we ever do another lyric video?
ReplyDeleteA very good question Susie! I am no music expert, I recommend someone who knows something about music ... perhaps the wonderful Miss D!!
ReplyDeleteHello Mr Roberts, I thing Miss D would be a good person to ask as well. What do you thing our next song could be about?
ReplyDeleteGood song Susie :) I like it.
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