If you did read the title we are going to be talking about China's pollution.
The SLJ team wants me to visit China and write a poem about traveling to China, but before we start I want to tell you some facts about China.
1. 1.1million people died last year in the air - pollution.
2. China has a very rich history, a very big city, yummy food.
3. Beijing is one of the largest cities in China.
Now let's get on with the Poem
Thank you a lot for reading my blog post today and I hope you can read the writing plus don't forget to tell me what I did wrong if you can spot any mistakes, Thank you again, bye everyone!!!
Good morning Susie,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you back on track again! I really enjoyed reading your story about visiting China - it felt as if I was in the country with you. It sounds like you've had a very long trip. I like how you talked about having to wear a mask outside and your cough getting worse! Missing the plane on top of all this with no money to spend sounds like a nightmare!
Your story clearly shows us what we might be experiencing in a country with bad air pollution. How did you FEEL as you were writing this story? Some people face this problem on a daily basis (everyday) and it makes me feel frightened and concerned.
Looking forward to hearing back from you,
Susie
Thank you for commenting on my blog post, would you go to China?
ReplyDeleteI would love to go to China for the experience - in fact, my hometown is right next to the country. I think travelling really helps us open our eyes because we get to share the experience of other people's everyday lives. It would feel quite different from simply watching it on the news.
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