Welcome back to my blog and today I'm going to be sharing my Hot Spot Doc writing with you.
So Rm 6 got given a photo and we had to describe the photo with all 5 senses.
1.Taste
2.Smell
3.Touch
4.See
5.Hear
So we wrote our own sentences and my teacher, Miss D highlighted the words we had to fix.
I had a few mistakes but I fixed them already.
Here is the photo.
Here is my work that I have done.
1. The lighting was roaring like a drum.
2. The big clouds covering the daylight spreads across the sky.
3. The Ocean air smelled like fish and seaweed.
4. The cold touch of the wild wind moved the water side to side.
5. The taste of the salty cold water made me feel sick inside.
Is there a word that I can change? Please let me know.
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