Welcome back to my blog, today I have a scary story to tell you.
It's about a girl who got trapped in a house.
My teacher gave everyone a starter sentence.
The sentence was: ‘I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black…’
We had to include these words.
- Chilling
- Forbidden
- Hesitant
- Unfocused
- Fascinating
So here is my scary story...
Here is my feedback my teacher gave me.
The challenge for today is: Write a story using these words.
- Chilling
- Forbidden
- Hesitant
- Unfocused
- Fascinating
The question for today is: Do you think my story was scary?
I'll talk to you the next time I post.
GoodBye!
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