Hey guys,
Welcome back to my blog, today I wrote an Acrostic Poem about me.
I did this on a google doc, I hope you enjoy it!
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey guys,
Welcome back to my blog, today I wrote an Acrostic Poem about me.
I did this on a google doc, I hope you enjoy it!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Susie!
ReplyDeleteWow! I like your acrostic poem about you. I like how you added interesting vocabulary like "Ingenious" and "Exemplary" not just ordinary adjectives. Next time, you don't add your last name to your acrostic poem regarding cyber safety online, just simply your first name. But I think you did a good job of it! Keep up the good work Susie! =)
kia Ora Susie brayden here.
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool I like how you used your name very smart.
I read the poem it was great.
next time you could maybe add a bit more writing
kind regards
brayden